Sunday, November 7, 2010

comment to loyalty

How true, loyalty is fluid, but it shouldn't be. Just because a better offer ocmes along does not mean someone should take it. I like how you have brought in an exmaple and begun to explain your point. Next time, try and expand, elaborate on your thoughts. You have great insight-develop it-tell me wha tis in your head-don't hav eme infer. Try and be a bit more explicit at times. I hope I am making sense.

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